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My only problem is how fast the strength progression is especially since you called systems cheese yet he arguably gets stronger faster in this fic than most system fanfictions, this guy is either blessed asf or written to get everything like how he has advanced arm n obs by chapter 13 or smth, honestly ion like the story but its still alr

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System's are just an easy way to implement abilities into One Piece that simply don't exist, I chose not to do so. The MC progresses fast sure but it's no where near plot breaking, it just seems that way because I've implemented quite a few time skips early on. Compare the strength's of certain character's in One Piece pre time skip to the current arc in the manga. In a span of 2 years, they've jumped massive levels.

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Yeah but when it comes to haki unless your the haki god, getting any form of advanced haki from straight training is a little far fetched

Pzero:System's are just an easy way to implement abilities into One Piece that simply don't exist, I chose not to do so. The MC progresses fast sure but it's no where near plot breaking, it just seems that way because I've implemented quite a few time skips early on. Compare the strength's of certain character's in One Piece pre time skip to the current arc in the manga. In a span of 2 years, they've jumped massive levels.
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Luffy and Zoro learned Advanced Conq and Armament in literally less than month at Wano. The MC learns it during a time skip, a period of 4 years, where it's written that he's been fighting pirates for years. Whilst simultaneously being mentored by Garp lol. Not far fetched at all imo

Abdul_Rahman_5112:Yeah but when it comes to haki unless your the haki god, getting any form of advanced haki from straight training is a little far fetched
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Yeah but they didn’t train it they got it from haki bloom, i js dont think you can train haki to gain advanced forms of it yk? 😪😭

Pzero:Luffy and Zoro learned Advanced Conq and Armament in literally less than month at Wano. The MC learns it during a time skip, a period of 4 years, where it's written that he's been fighting pirates for years. Whilst simultaneously being mentored by Garp lol. Not far fetched at all imo
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Does the mc have a devil fruit?

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Nope

Jor_7862:Does the mc have a devil fruit?
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I mean luffy LITERALLY trained for it; punched a metal slab for a couple days… this guy got it over 4 years fighting. It makes sense, even more sense really.

Abdul_Rahman_5112:Yeah but they didn’t train it they got it from haki bloom, i js dont think you can train haki to gain advanced forms of it yk? 😪😭
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For advanced arm yeah but he was practically at the peak in all three of his hakis by then, he had a haki bloom like a few weeks ago and again against kat, my point is to get past a bottleneck you need haki bloom you cant train to beat kaido, luffy was getting haki bloom in most of his fights so he never hit a limit (the adv arm was a rare time he trained haki)

DaoisteRfNed:I mean luffy LITERALLY trained for it; punched a metal slab for a couple days… this guy got it over 4 years fighting. It makes sense, even more sense really.