Honestly this fic is very underwhelming. While the grammar is decent the quality of writing itself is pretty mediocre. The interactions between people and the dialogues are very bland and uninteresting, the man hating goddess having a crush on him after a short interaction its just a classic case of making other characters dumb to make the mc look good. His training arc is the most disappointing thing ever i feel like you gave absolutely no thoughts into it" he was fighting a tiger and their fists collided" really? Then few months later he was training against tiger,bear and an eagle AN EAGLE seriously?He is influenced by sukuna and has violent nature yet he feels attraction towards women? This is literally just an edgy mc. The whole fic altogether is extremely fast paced.
Zekt
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me gustaI declared that this review is true. Still including the crime of fanfic of inserting several cursed techniques into the main character unnecessarily, as well as self-satisfaction for the main character, for not adding to the plot (if it were something similar to Kenjaku or Sukuna embodying in other bodies, it would be forgiven).