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The_Jeffinator
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Needs work on the inner dialogue. Thought process of the mc is very robotic, excessively analytical, and frankly disjointed from the actual important things people tend to notice or think about. I can tell this won't be my cup of tea, hope the rest of you enjoy.

MHA: Shadow manipulation

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Yeah I kinda agree with you here but other than the how the mc’s thought process it seems alright