As of chapter 3, the story is okay. The author appears to be new as he rushes through some key development for the characters and some of the dialogue is out of place for the situation, however look fast the issues and it appears to be a fun read. I suspect with a bit of practice the author could be far better, so I’m looking forward for more chapters. Thank you for writing this author.
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