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DetachedDreamer
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The grammar is abysmal. have to spend a portion of your mind auto correcting and ignoring the lack of attention the author put into editing. the idea certainly isn't bad, I like the concept, but I just don't think the MCs origins and the beginning of this story is fleshed out or expanded upon in anyway. basically just becomes a vampire, avoids Marcel and the new Orlean vamps with no problems, then just walks up to the originals in a way that would only threaten Klaus and leave no room for a fair trade or deal. I also dont think the author is committed enough to the details of the story.

Reincarnated in The originals as a human

Rahaan_Saleem

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Fuck_Webnovel
Fuck_WebnovelLv4Fuck_Webnovel

Motherfucker are you retarded?💀💀🙏💀💀💀

Rahaan_Saleem:Don’t read it if your gonna hate
Rahaan_Saleem
Rahaan_SaleemAutorRahaan_Saleem

Don’t read it if your gonna hate

Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1Tim_QQQ

this was a constructive comment, not even mean. grow some balls.

Rahaan_Saleem:Don’t read it if your gonna hate
Rahaan_Saleem
Rahaan_SaleemAutorRahaan_Saleem

How about you grow some balls

Tim_QQQ:this was a constructive comment, not even mean. grow some balls.
Joel_White_9434
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Confused about the high rating of u don’t like it tho?

Vedora_Tempest
Vedora_TempestLv12Vedora_Tempest

Dude, why hate when he wrote what flaws your fic had? you can choose to improve the writing instead of hating..

Rahaan_Saleem:How about you grow some balls
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