DetachedDreamer

template systems are always trash

why are so many chapters invested in this rocky fella? Will he ever appear again after this? he should if a week of updates are focused on him

Overall not bad but kinda dull. Boring MC whos really horny but born with no talent. he gets his golden finger and starts collecting women from different worlds. The author kills off all men and makes sure the women throw their parents in the trash for the MC. Honestly there isn't anything good about the MC, no redeeming qualities, nothing to relate to, single minded but other than that the plot is interesting. grammar is decent. The story has potential but this MC so far is basic.

nah the author is just a hornball but nothing wrong with that

im happy folk who write stuff like this are sad and depressed. deserved. no wonder their parents hate em.

Jesus sounds terrible thank you for the heads up

lol Authors who write MCs like this hate themselves for sure. lack of love from parents or no friends. idk but it damaged the author.

what f*cking stupid idiot, who wants their MC to be this dumb?

I couldn't get past the first chapter. crude translation. words incorrectly translated. some reason the MC knows how child birth feels, so im guessing he was a female who transitioned and identified as a man in his/her past life, im not into that stuff. a lot going on here that ruins the story. you must be blind.

oh no a 5 day break. hope this aint the end!