The whole idea is really good and pretty well thought out, but it has lot of gramatical mistakes and sometimes the author jumps randomly from one information to another without finishing the first one. everything expect the writing quaility is 5 stars. I would suggest to retrospectively read the chapters after yourself and edit them.
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