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tALvaNCH
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It is pretty good Idea but I just don't like it that he become somone like a fortuneteller it is kinda lame. Atleast he didn't tell them he reincarnated.

Going The Whitebeard Route In Naruto

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The MC is too much stupid and too doo gooder .Yes author qill say who cares and dada but when a 2 year old does this nonsense I don't know which world ypu are in it will be difficult .He doesnot have anything to protect himself and he is 2 years old .He is just putting Target in his back .Yes warning parents is fine.He cpuld go other way like he had seen nightnares of them dying in poison like that .I Find it very ridiculous that if he is from modern world and Watched Naruto many times that still he dows this and the fuck is whitebeard route .He is just acting like adult . Author will bash me , I know this kind of authors .so I don't care . A fanfic is fanfic but atleast make it believable in sense of even Anime wold. Sakumo comming to Kill .what nonsense.An anbu cannot stop Sakumo. He is not Naive he is oversmart .A two year old cant fo anything he says even in Naruto world .

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