Definitely needs a spellchecker. There’s periods where there’s supposed to be commas. Definitely affects the reading. Other than that, it’s really good especially bc it’s a shadow slave fic.
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I recommend writing on a doc so Grammarly works
The_oneandonly344:I will try to be more observable
I will try to be more observable
Yea and the majority of names aren't even properly capitalized (Even the title of the novel)