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Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv310mth
2024-01-05 08:33

It works but it's lacking in the flow of the writing. It just sounds bland and uses simple or cliche wording. For a fanfic, it's alright, but the dialogues needs to be refined

My Hero Academia : Lust Hero

SaikiKusu
4.0
45 Chs

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SaikiKusu
SaikiKusuAutor

im not cryingI just have something in my eye.

10mth
1
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

😂 don't feel bad, if you have something that can hold you back you should fix it.

SaikiKusu:im not cryingI just have something in my eye.
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10mth
1
SaikiKusu
SaikiKusuAutor

In real life, i either go too fast or too slow in doing things, the same apply to my stories, the pacing is without a doubt, besides dialogues and povs switching are my weaknesses, BUT, I'll Go PPPPLLLLLUUUUSSSS ULLLLLTTTTRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Kono_Timoda:😂 don't feel bad, if you have something that can hold you back you should fix it.
10mth
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Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3

I see a lot of potential in this work, I hope you don't abandon it and if you have any problems with this work, we readers would love to give your opinion! Leave a note on the chapters and we will respond in the comments, just don't abandon this work!!

11mth

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

I finaly find it, a story whare author Hates this fact just like me, what Hirikoshi did to Kayama Nemuri in the manga, and she is also MC Main love interest to.? i will support you with all my power, that's a pomise.

10mth
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Cringe and edgelord MC, he doesn't know the basic anatomy of women and the MC's dialogues sounding like a 4 year old are the epitome of cringe, the author really wrote this to annoy, I can't find any other meaning for this fanfic. PD: I only read up to chapter 12 I think, and of the 12 chapters 8 were about the prelude to Midtnight's lemon, the author is really desperate for power stones. I have a screenshot of this review as proof that it existed

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Daoist730sPk
Daoist730sPkLv1

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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Mc Yugen is at this moment still learning the ropes of how to be a Hero, and him wanting harem is more like because of his system and the fact most of the BNHA girls are easy to win they hearts over, blame Hirikoshi for it.

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DabanCrow
DabanCrowLv14

Like the story so far. A little unique and of course the 18+ area is nice. I went ahead and subbed on Patreon. Good luck on the paths of an author. Now excuse me while I enjoy this Fanfiction.

10mth
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Great story, i love New chapters and i like how accepting and helpfull Midnight is for Yugen progres,for him to not be lost and alone. And her decision to how support him..... i love it. Ryuuku is the best to.

10mth
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Oh boy what i can say, i love Kayama Nemuri she is like sexy auntie who cares for all thestudents, I Hope this story will not end up droped like many others before it.

10mth
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

I realy like this story, it has great potential to be one of the best BNHA FF on net, i know because i read them for years now.

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Darkaiju
DarkaijuLv4

I really like this story and I look forward to the next chapters every time. I really like the story of the main character and especially his future harem. I wish you good luck with the future and I will give you power stones as much as I can. Good luck for the future. Best regards.

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