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+1 for harem honestly, I came to this fic because I saw the harem tag and I was promised a harem, and because of that, I dropped this fic yesterday. I didn't bother reading the last chapter because I thought the harem was scrapped, but now that there is Hope, Men, I CALL YOU TO ARMS, my soldiers do not buckle or yield when faced with the cruelty of this world! MY SOLDIERS PUSH FORWARD! MY SOLDIERS SCREAM OUT! MY SOLDIERS RAGE!(read: vote for harem) PS: I posted this on the paragraph comment, but for those that can't read those comments, I posted it here so y'all can hear the call to arms!
+1 honestly, I came to this fic because I saw the harem tag and I was promised a harem, and because of that, I dropped this fic yesterday. I didn't bother reading the last chapter because I thought the harem was scrapped, but now that there is Hope, Men, I CALL YOU TO ARMS, my soldiers do not buckle or yield when faced with the cruelty of this world! MY SOLDIERS PUSH FORWARD! MY SOLDIERS SCREAM OUT! MY SOLDIERS RAGE!(read: vote for harem)
A well deserved 4.7 rating fic It's slow paced with several comedic moments but offers a lot of World building theories adding a new take to the generic Naruto fanfic world. The romance is also quite entertaining, can't wait to see more.
Stuffers from broken English and reversed grammar, like the author's first language has reversed certain phrases which comes out in English.
Great idea just boring to read, I'll read more chapters later but I don't have my hopes up. ...................................................
Yesyesyesyesyesyesyes
5 bucks says Harry is rule63
Can you tell us when the arc is finished in pat re on so I now when to join
Nah, empathizing with sukuna isn't that jarring with how strange the world of jiu jitsu is cannibalism isn't that weird but if you experience nothingness or boredom in your life I can see how you can relate.
The smut needs some work, try and read some ao3 works or any other popular smut stories as reference. Otherwise, it's an okay start. I was expecting something more creative other that an ugly bastard with hypnosis. But it's readable and I can see myself reading it once in a while. But it needs work.