Item: The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]
Rating: 1.4

SiuuuLv41yr

2023-09-03 15:27

I just read upto 3 chapters and i wanted to drop this novel more than ten times. like this is annoying and typical brainless novel. Mc is foodless,homeless-penniless, everything less and a crybaby, like with magic at least you won't be starved you can conjure water and atleast work in muggle world or do small jobs in magical world but no MC is an idiot. Don't waste your time in this novel.

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

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