Review Detail of MorbidCuriosity in Naruto : Raijin

Item: Naruto : Raijin
Rating: 5

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MorbidCuriosityAutor1yrMorbidCuriosity

I have completely overhauled the writing and grammar and if you all who have already read this novel you guys can reread. If you want too. I will update the novel soon give me some time. Fixing grammar on both of my books was a pain.

Naruto : Raijin

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Orion_RidgeLv1Orion_Ridge

Will this have romance? If yes, then harem or single fml? What's the update schedule? Thanks for the story!

1yr

ChaddtsLv1Chaddts

I can see that you used a.i to overhaul the grammar. The problem being, is that it's repetitive. It's very easy to notice it, and it's bland, it lacks emotion, and realism.

1yr