Review Detail of Truth_Only_Reader in Instant Death [DxD]
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I am gonna write a more detailed review than my last one since I only said I just like it. Writing quality, it's has good grammar and everything barely any errors. That readers can usually spot. The only problem I have is of course you included characters from other anime which is fine, but me personally I would love if you focus more on the aspect of the DXD universe more. But I am fine with the MC learning other skills since he is basically death himself. Story Development is good, of course he is gonna be overpowered since he is the literal embodiment of death and there is a lot of funny scenes I love in this novel. Especially his cute obsession with Sona. The pacing is of course a problem in this novel but it can be fixed in the future. Something that I wish you could do is to expand his ability in the field of art a bit more and there are some plot holes in the University Visitation chapter, like what happened with his paintings or sculptures which needed to be somewhat explained. Other than that story development is good so far. Character design is good, its basically DXD and other animes that you could search with Google, I read novels mostly on my phone, so computer users will have a easier time to find the anime characters online. So far so good. Updating Stability is amazing, sometimes we get 1 to 3 chapters a day which is a lot. That is saying a lot also about author dedication and research to this novel. No pressure. World Background, is just DXD with other animes, but the main premise is DXD of course. So far a good novel that I look forward to reading in my day, and I hope you can continue. Hope you can take my review into consideration and that it helps you have to proceed with this novel.
Instant Death [DxD]
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average_ff_enjoyr:sona really !? she is mid in EVERYTHING i gusse the MC is a bit wired in the head
Truth_Only_Reader:People have their types, no need to say that she is mid. 😕
I have no clue so far what the author is doing, the main pairing is Sona, but from how its going... it might be a harem? But it looks like it centered most around Sona so it might be single. Let see.
TheRamenLord:its a dxd fanfic so is it a harem? there is no harem tag so i was sceptical. Do you know the pairing for the MC? like who is the love interest?
Truth_Only_Reader:People have their types, no need to say that she is mid. 😕
I’m always baffled with DXD stories with no harem. That’s like a Harry Potter fic with no magic. Or Naruto story with no Chakra.
TheRamenLord:its a dxd fanfic so is it a harem? there is no harem tag so i was sceptical. Do you know the pairing for the MC? like who is the love interest?
Truth_Only_Reader:I have no clue so far what the author is doing, the main pairing is Sona, but from how its going... it might be a harem? But it looks like it centered most around Sona so it might be single. Let see.
Your review brought up a few things I dislike. First of all is bringing other animes or animes characters into the story when it’s unnecessary. DXD is a huge world there are tons of faction for possible OCs there’s no need to bring other animes/characters except laziness. It also doesn’t help thay often the new introduced anime world/anime characters often detract and take time away from the MC and the original DXD characters. This is a DXD fic, I want a focus on the MC and DXD characters like Rias, Akeno, Sairorg, Azazel, etc. Not other characters from who knows what anime the Author decided to suddenly shoehorn into the story. Another problem I have is Sona, just Sona honestly. I don’t really like her, she’s no that interesting and she not attractive either. Tsubaki and Momo from her peerage are way better in all aspects. I don’t get the obsession with her. It would be acceptable if it was a harem and she joined but if she’s the single loveninterest as it’s implied well that’s a huge disappointment. And another thing, how can someone write a DXD fanfic with no harem. It’s like a Harry Potter fic with no magic. If you really love Single loves and hate harems that’ great but go have bo harems in other anime worlds. DXD is basically built for harems. I know you aren’t the Author but in the end I vented here anyway.
I agree with you, it's a DXD fanfiction, but to me its refreshing to see a no harem DXD fanfiction at time, unfortunately for me it is a harem route fanfiction, which I am not fond of but I will not judge. I also agree with the focus of being DXD, however the author is going the multiverse route because the MC is death embodiment. So it kinda does make sense to have a multiverse but it isn't my taste which is why I stopped reading it after the DXD arc. I get why you don't like Sona, however again its refreshing for me to have a Sona ship that is flushed out just like this fanfiction. But I get why people want to ship someone like Tsubaki, Rias, and etc. But I have seen so many of that ship that it gets boring to me. Of course I am not judging your taste, I am just so bored of it and I do apologize if it may sound like I am judging it. Other than that, thank you for the criticism of my review, it will certainly help me review other novels in the future.