Review Detail of SmilingReader99 in Teen Lion: a Teen Wolf Fan-Fic

Pretty decent Fanfic so far, only have a few issues if you could really call it that. One is that the grammar needs some work. Not sure if English is a second language to the author or not but it needs some work. Another is the dialog, if feels very weird and Disorienting, reading American teenagers talk like characters out of a Chinese wuxia novel. Besides that, not to bad.