Review Detail of daylightmoon123445 in Moondust: the moment of tangency

Please, the first 5 chapters are a bit too chaotic, but it gets better trust me. I've made mistakes, but I was very young when I wrote this, and I'm glad I got the opportunity and inspiration to continue it now :) I'm on hiatus till October 2023, but I've been stockpiling them for a long time now and hopefully they are appealing for readers :)