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Moondust: the moment of tangency

Autor: daylightmoon123445
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What is Moondust: the moment of tangency

Lee la novela Moondust: the moment of tangency escrita por el autor daylightmoon123445 publicada en WebNovel. 'If our lives are already written, it would take a courageous man to change the script.'- Alan WakeMeet Alexia, a determined 16-year-old girl who is stuck between her relentless insomnia and the delic...

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'If our lives are already written, it would take a courageous man to change the script.' - Alan Wake Meet Alexia, a determined 16-year-old girl who is stuck between her relentless insomnia and the delicate threads of her social life. As her struggles intensify, her relationship with her twin sister becomes strained by the weight of missed schoolwork and Alexia's constant plea for favors. Isolated and friendless, Alexia becomes an easy target for merciless bullies, trapped in the suffocating grip of her own existence. Yet, amidst her despair, a glimmer of hope emerges. With unwavering determination, she makes a promise to herself to break free from her shell, forging new connections and chasing her long-forgotten dreams. However, an unsettling emptiness gnaws at her heart, casting doubt upon her very existence. Just as the shadows threaten to consume her, a mysterious girl arrives at her school, shrouded in enigma and bearing secrets untold. Alexia senses that something sinister lurks beneath the surface, and as she unravels the threads of this stranger's identity, she is drawn into a world of darkness and intrigue. Brace yourself for a journey that intertwines friendship, self-discovery, and the chilling realization that some secrets should remain buried. In "Moondust: moment of tangency" prepare to question everything you thought you knew as Alexia embarks on a perilous quest to uncover the truth, even if it means confronting the shadows within herself. (Cover doesn't belong to me, if you're the artist please do contact me) **Announcement: The author is going on hiatus till October 14! Don't worry, I'll be back soon, till then, stay tuned for any updates!**

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daylightmoon123445
daylightmoon123445Lv1daylightmoon123445

Hey, shameless author review here! But you know what they say, you are your first biggest fan :) So, I'll be honest here, I don't know how this story will turn out. This was a thriller, but the thriller didn't speak to me, so I just changed it to something overnight(because I can, lol). Regarding the writing quality and story development, as far as I can say, it's nice and it's readable so it's of good quality. My favorite part of the story is the characters, especially the side ones. I enjoy writing them so much and I hope you like them as well!! I've never been good in the stability of updates, but let me try and stay consistent this time(I've been stockpiling the chapters like huntsmen do for winter). The world background is well...it's not pretty wide since it's just a small town, but hey, you never know(hint, hint). Thanks for reading my story, let me know some tips and tops, and please don't leave anything mean, I would gladly learn from my mistakes but not at the cost of my feelings.

Patience_Agboola
Patience_AgboolaLv4Patience_Agboola

The book is so good only read a few chapters and I am already hooked update more chapters please

JayZee_007
JayZee_007Lv2JayZee_007

I was hooked by this book from the first chapter, as it introduced me to the fascinating and complex character of Alexia, a 16-year-old girl who suffers from insomnia and social anxiety. The author did a great job of portraying her struggles and emotions, making me empathize with her and root for her. The story was fast-paced and full of surprises, as Alexia encountered a mysterious girl who changed her life forever. The plot was well-written and original, with a lot of twists and turns that kept me guessing until the end. The book also explored themes such as identity, destiny, friendship, and courage, in a realistic and relatable way. The writing style was smooth and captivating, with vivid descriptions and engaging dialogue. The book had a cliffhanger ending that left me wanting more, and I can’t wait to read the next installment. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves sci-fi, mystery, and drama, with a touch of romance. This book was a gem that deserves more recognition.

GEEGEE
GEEGEELv13GEEGEE

In love with those made up words. makes our MC very unique. Very curious about a lot of things and hoping to get some answers as chapters come in the future. Keep up d good work🥰🥰🥰🥰

alu_sachi
alu_sachiLv12alu_sachi

This is such a good work. Thought it is only a few chapters, behind these few chapters I have seen a level of greatness that I have never seen. The author is too creative and talented in that anyone can easily get drowned in this fantasy not knowing how they will get out.Truly a great work.

ATOMIC_MOON
ATOMIC_MOONLv3ATOMIC_MOON

Honestly, I am immersed in the story while reading the constant change of scenes the writing quality is excellent But the punctuation was a little off I am sure you will sort out that thing too

daylightmoon123445
daylightmoon123445Lv1daylightmoon123445

Please, the first 5 chapters are a bit too chaotic, but it gets better trust me. I've made mistakes, but I was very young when I wrote this, and I'm glad I got the opportunity and inspiration to continue it now :) I'm on hiatus till October 2023, but I've been stockpiling them for a long time now and hopefully they are appealing for readers :)

Anam_zulfiqar
Anam_zulfiqarLv2Anam_zulfiqar

The MC is so unique oml. and you display her uniqueness in such a good manner where it gets interesting the more I read it! will definitely recommend this to others on here! ^^

Gabrielle_Johnson_6482
Gabrielle_Johnson_6482Lv13Gabrielle_Johnson_6482

This book is heading in a really interesting direction- much different from what I originally thought. Am very interested to find out more about the cause of Lexis nightmares. Somethings not right with her life.

jaymanifesto
jaymanifestoLv3jaymanifesto

This book is somewhat relatable in terms of character design. Upon reading the synopsis, I can’t help but picture a shy, self-conscious girl who has a lot of issues to confront within herself. Overall, the writing style is good. I don’t have much to say about how this story will play out since it’s full of mysteries as a story, and we have yet to learn more about Alexia. However, if I were to be honest I find the trope of the MC a bit….overrated. I’ve seen many of the “socially anxious female MC” in certain medias and my advice is to add a bit of elements that could make your story stand out more. Try mentioning a short backstory of how she turned out to be friendless and introverted in the synopsis, since your synopsis will basically be the “first impression” people will notice about your story. Overall, that is my only complaint. I love the Edgar Allan Poe passage in the beginning, it gives me a vibe of a mysterious, angsty indie RPG game where MC has a lot of secrets to uncover. Keep pushing, author!

Venkadesh_S_7600
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I am in love with this book! The plot gets deeper and deeper every chapter and some lore is obviously present, which makes me want to keep reading. The author is leisurely uploading all chapters, but quality takes time. The story is original and I love it very much! I'm sticking with the story for a while now :)

GMSJakers
GMSJakersLv1GMSJakers

The sheer creativity that spices up this story is absolutely beautiful. The story has such a different premise that you're immediately hooked to this book.

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