Review Detail of JStyles in HP: First Light

Item: HP: First Light
Rating: 1.8

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JStylesLv141yrJStyles

lot of grammar mistakes changing Pov's 3 times in 1 paragraph Mc creating his own fking ai/sytem with 0 knowledge about it too many plotholes mc broken without any reason etc

HP: First Light

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BalladLv5Ballad

Ya the MC creating he's own system is the reason I dropped at the end of year 1. It completely killed the story for me.

1yr