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JStyles23hrespondió a James_Carlson_5574Chama
"What, afraid you won't be able to control yourself around all this?" Hiro gestured to himself, still grinning.- JStyles1dComentado porCh 14 Deadly Altercation
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At him*
"What's the occasion~" Satoru asked with a silly tone as he wiggled his eye brow, Shigaraki looked at his with a cold look before he walked outside with his suit case and a phone in his hands, Satoru smiled as he followed him. - JStyles1drespondió a LT_Ryuu_X
He explained that a part of the reason he is fighting nine tails is to blow off some stress
Mirai then heard a familiar, gentle voice that provoked many of his emotions. "I sensed a disturbance in the seal, so I came to check. I didn't expect to find you battling the Nine-Tails, Mirai. Still as impulsive as ever, I see." - JStyles4dComentado por
Feels like a child whose first language is not English wrote this
One day May arrived at the house with a shotgun and threatened them, In just two days they mentally broke making them leave the town. Robert who felt a bit guilty gave them 1000 dollars each family. - JStyles4drespondió a athex
Yeah but endurance is easy to increase
There were a total of 527 students–in which 43 were expelled. - JStyles5dComentado por
Dropped No person with normal iq gives that much money to a random person on the street without any proof There was no need to make your main character and the “wise advisor” this dumb to move the plot Good luck with your story Final rating 1.5/5
Ch 17 DO I LOOK LIKE I GIVE A SHIT?! - JStyles6drespondió a PhysX
No Unless he fightswith pro fight rules
In his previous life, Ron had been an international-level amateur boxer. He was a talented boxer who had achieved such level at the mere age of 19. Sadly he died before he could even turn 20, a lot of his dreams left unfulfilled. - JStyles14dComentado por
Jake flexing on her😂
I pulled out my phone and opened my bank app. "We're not supposed to touch our savings, but look at my checking account." - JStyles15dComentado por
😂
While the villain is hammering at the barrier Horizno turns toward Great Hound, "Firstly, I'm not a cyborg, and secondly, that must have been racist. Do you think all people in wheelchairs know each other?" - JStyles18dPublicado por
Above average story With the potential to be really good one But the author is not good enough right now Maybe if they were more mature then this story would have been a lot different The story screams “EMO” The author wanted it to be filled with plot twists and epic moments And they got lost in that The best parts of the story were the interactions between the characters but the author didn’t realize that focused too much on the “scehemes/fate/plans” bs and fkd it A simpler story would have been better Also the mc doesn’t make any progress as a character My advice will be to make it simpler Remove the awful attempts to make it a “masterpiece filled with schemes” and focus on the other parts
- JStyles19drespondió a Mimi729
Who dis?
Besides, Dressed in full black with white hair was just awesome. - JStyles19dComentado porBecause all badass characters wore black. That was an ironclad rule.
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Tf will his teacher say? “Hajime why outside of school hours you are meeting with other people?”
As soon as Kirisu blended into the crowd, Hajime also stood up and proceeded to head back home. No sooner had he faced the door that his expression turned a dark one-eighty. His eyes glanced to the side before he clicked his tongue. "Why is she following me? Is she really stalking me right now? If she really wants to follow me properly, she should've done a better job. I've been running from debt collectors for the past year, of course, I'd know if I'm being followed." Hajime said to himself. It was clear that Megumi already misunderstood the situation. At first, he was going to leave her be, but then she remembered how she pointed his camera at him and took a picture. If she were to send that picture to their homeroom teacher, questions will be asked and he'd be summoned to her office once again. - JStyles20dComentado por
Ah yes meeting with a nurse in a public place How lewd
"Not happening, just don't wear your nurse uniform from now on. Countless rumors are already circulating around my school— about how I'm into that kind of thing. I don't want any more misunderstandings so please wear that." Hajime heaved a sigh. "Also, you can keep it. It's my thank-you for the pastries." - JStyles20drespondió a axon
He is a kid
"T-that... I can't tell you sensei." Hajime had no words to say except try to hide as many details as possible. He didn't want his teacher to take pity on him. And furthermore, he didn't want her assistance. He could tell that his teacher would fully support him if he told him the reason behind his part-time job. He shook his head. 'No, I won't say any more than this. She doesn't have to know. I don't want anyone to know. I can do this by myself.' He thought to himself. - JStyles20dComentado por
Police
It was a miracle that Hajime was still alive after a year of running away from the merciless debt collectors. They wouldn't think twice about resorting to violence, after all, and Hajime knew nothing will happen if he just let himself become their punching bag. Pretty soon, he concluded that the loan sharks were absolutely fixated on wringing money from his pockets. - JStyles21dComentado porCh 20 Reverse Cursed Technique 3 .
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Bruh write some details How was he reborn Where His new family What are they like How does he look How was his second childhood Was it easy to adapt Did he miss his old family? Why did he choose serin Did he participate in middle school competitions?? Feels like i am reading a summary of chapters
Ch 5 The Newcomer - JStyles21dComentado por
Save me goat from Papa Perez and his pr😭
for me you know If Messi doesn't come here, wouldn't it be a loss?