Review Detail of Zerot_Solar in "A Match Made in Heaven" Rimuru x Asia - Tensura X High school DXD

The grammar is horrible you need to give proofread as the mistake are easy to resolve. Story don’t develop at all, this is just to fulfill a dream of sort, OP characters doing OP things while keeping it secret is a turn off if you don’t know how to execute it. Then there’s the random no canon villains popping up now. Review from chapter 1-10