well sorry about that English is not my first Language And I'm not a professional.

not bad at all I kinda want to see Kirito vs Rimuru since both of them are one of my fave anime characters

daam why all of your works have to be so unique I Never came up with this kinds of idea

Rimuru as Luminous was a good idea will Luminous fall for her own self?

very Unique and It's nice to see someone that appreciate one of the best girl in Tensura and Carrera having the personality of Shizue makes It more cool

Not the best Translation but it's Good over all I like it.

daam I can't wait for more chapter I wonder what will happened to Hinata.

good story with nice progression I do hope to see more chapters