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ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv41yr
2023-05-23 05:05

The story was good at first, but the main character has no sense of ownership.In short, the first thing I disliked was the Shiro x Lorelei couple. (The chapters where Shirou was whi*ped and the relationship was totally forced). And go to Kuroino world (a hen*ai world),Instead of saving a rated character beforehand, she gets involved in the story after she was ra*ed. I'm sorry but I refuse to read a story that includes ra*e and hentai.good luck to you all.(Re-review after deletion)

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Charlottes
3.9
121 Chs

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FandomExplorer_2nd
FandomExplorer_2ndLv4

Oh well.. Fair enough but atleast the mc help celestine and other characters from (Kuroinu)

1yr
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Sir_Stronghold
Sir_StrongholdLv15

why help someone after they've been raped...?

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SpookierSapling
SpookierSaplingLv14

Ok I may have worded that very wrongly, and I just now read it again after reading your comment. I meant why not help her so she doesn’t get raped or before she is and instead writing about her being raped and then helping afterwards. That was poor choice of wording on my part

Sir_Stronghold:why help someone after they've been raped...?
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Cerberus_36
Cerberus_36Lv14

im more concerned with your question bro.

Sir_Stronghold:why help someone after they've been raped...?
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Sir_Stronghold
Sir_StrongholdLv15

that wasnt my question but the response to the same question. Someone said why save someone who's been raped so I questioned it with consern

Cerberus_36:im more concerned with your question bro.
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Cerberus_36
Cerberus_36Lv14

oh yeah sorry bro i dont see that 🤣 my bad my bad

Sir_Stronghold:that wasnt my question but the response to the same question. Someone said why save someone who's been raped so I questioned it with consern
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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

So...The police should not arrest people who have had sexual relations with their kidnapped daughter and under the influence of hallucinogens. Right?

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SpookierSapling
SpookierSaplingLv14

Check my second response, I explained I meant why write a story about after she was raped instead of just writing a story where she wasn’t raped yet or in the first place because mc saves her from that fate that was the whole intention I just worded that so wrongly and so badly it came out in a completely different direction

Bob_Uchiha_XD:So...The police should not arrest people who have had sexual relations with their kidnapped daughter and under the influence of hallucinogens. Right?
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SpookierSapling
SpookierSaplingLv14

Read further down my guy

Bob_Uchiha_XD:So...The police should not arrest people who have had sexual relations with their kidnapped daughter and under the influence of hallucinogens. Right?
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midgetydeath
midgetydeathLv4

Sir_Stronghold:why help someone after they've been raped...?
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Charlottes
CharlottesAutor

I can't actually remember the last time I wrote a review, maybe it was a year ago or something, but it isn't really too important. Anyway, since it's my fanfiction I'll put 5 star naturally, since it's literally the manifestation of my ideal fanfiction, but I can't say the same for others though. This might ironic coming from me, but I'll do my best to finish this. Either, there is much I want to say since everything I want people to know is literally in the summary already.

1yr

Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2

The author deleted all reviews so I won't write a long review.There is r*pe in the story...........................................................................................................................

1yr
Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

I really love all your works Charlotte sensai but at lesst finish them first, then start a new one, u will definitely or most likely will Lose interest in the previous ones like that.

1yr
LuminousValentine
LuminousValentineLv11

where is the 1 star review I thought before this fanfic rating was 3.5...................................................................................................................

1yr
Adrian_Nyel
Adrian_NyelLv4

I really like your stories Charlotte and this story also has promise but, you should really focus more on your stories considering all the stories that you left hanging or you just forgotten.

1yr
EarthlyNatureLover
EarthlyNatureLoverLv14

Revela spoiler

1yr
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

Parece que el autor borró todas las calificaciones bajas, El MC tiene una relación con personajes de H de violaciones . 🤮🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
Ased
AsedLv11

Well, I'm really sorry about your dad, but that doesn't change my opinion... Fanfic. All the action in the store is the same (when a new customer shows up). Also, I don't remember exactly because it's been a long time since I read it, but I definitely remember the problem with the MC and his Chinese stereotype persona. Well, the rating should have been 3.5-3.7, but you just deleted the reviews. Disappointment.

1yr
iffats
iffatsLv10

Pretty bad OC and Force interactions, and imagine shipping Lorelei and Shirou Emiya being Lorelei his sister? Simply disgusting as it's obvious it'll be quite force and I won't even bother seeing it through.

1yr
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