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This story is about the MC being born without tails and everyone "discriminating" against him. He in fact called out "discrimination" before he even faced any. In fact he doesn't face any discrimination just people looking mean at him or something... The author is just low IQ and this story reflects that. Nothing interesting or real is being told here so this is the best he can do.
Of Foxfire and Cultivation (A Kitsune Young Master DxD Fic)
Daddy
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It's fine if this is your take on my story, but I can't help but think you didn't read past the first 10 chapters. After the first mini-plot-arc, the tails becomes almost irrelevant to the story. I basically just use it as a face-slapping device. Sure, it's forced, but I don't think I linger on that plot point...
InternetSaintLv1InternetSaint
Daddy:It's fine if this is your take on my story, but I can't help but think you didn't read past the first 10 chapters. After the first mini-plot-arc, the tails becomes almost irrelevant to the story. I basically just use it as a face-slapping device. Sure, it's forced, but I don't think I linger on that plot point...
Chaotic_WinterLv12Chaotic_Winter
Daddy:That's fair. Even if you didn't like my story, thanks for the review.
InternetSaintLv1InternetSaint
Diky_Maulana:Wkwkkw..... another xianxia protagonis,, But i like this one 👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻