There some spelling mistakes and words that don’t fit the sentence so the flow was off in the paragraph but it is a start i would recommend reading it of before you post it it does have promises just smooth out the ruffles and you should be good. I give it a 8/10 and I try again later to read.
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me gustaI know but it's late now because this book is coming to an end there are only 3 chapter left those are[ Chaybidis, Falmuth Strikes and Walpgris] Currently i am worth on [A New Niece] which is Chaybidis so yeah i can't change it now but i am working on my second book which is {Reincarnated in MCU with Skill Creation} So make sure to check it out when it releases!
Do you have any other stories you've written? I see a Reincarnated in MCU story but on your page, i only see 'that time i got reincarnated as a wolf'.
SpritVoidWolf:I know but it's late now because this book is coming to an end there are only 3 chapter left those are[ Chaybidis, Falmuth Strikes and Walpgris] Currently i am worth on [A New Niece] which is Chaybidis so yeah i can't change it now but i am working on my second book which is {Reincarnated in MCU with Skill Creation} So make sure to check it out when it releases!
Pedro_Padre:Do you have any other stories you've written? I see a Reincarnated in MCU story but on your page, i only see 'that time i got reincarnated as a wolf'.