Review Detail of Dissociation in A Second Chance of Having Youth

Look, I'm a heavy fantasy guy, so I might seem a little bias -- but hey! I quite liked this one! It's got well written characters whose personalities have obviously been thought-out extensively by the author! At times it feels like you can hear them in the ambient noise of your room, or right next to you! Only major complaint is the quality of writing, needs a touchup here and there.