This is my second original novel, I will be improving the content of the chapters as I write the novel. The more active you are, the more chapters I will publish. I hope you enjoy it!
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me gustaa bit suggestion for this novel, can u change victor name? cause hearing victor yang or yang victor in a cultivation world didnt seem right and it make me itchy all the way while i'm reading ur book, like c'mon ur in a new world, new person, and victor is already dead, if every single his reincarnation named victor its really strange. as if orc victor, goblin victor, gnome victor, half elf victor, victor this victor that, etc. i'm tired of this name LoL
grandis:a bit suggestion for this novel, can u change victor name? cause hearing victor yang or yang victor in a cultivation world didnt seem right and it make me itchy all the way while i'm reading ur book, like c'mon ur in a new world, new person, and victor is already dead, if every single his reincarnation named victor its really strange. as if orc victor, goblin victor, gnome victor, half elf victor, victor this victor that, etc. i'm tired of this name LoL
Thank you, I don't have time yet to increase the number of words in the chapters but I will try to fix that.
Robloxian:the novel is great until now , but the chapters are too short , I hope you can change that
why don't you reply to the comments about the change of names !?? if you want to write a Chinese cultivation themed novel for fk sake change the name ... or make it so that it's not just Chinese cultivation themed ... don't you ever read readers comments !? or do you not value their opinions on some matters !? cz while this is your book you can do whatever but you should also get opinions as well...
CASSIAN:Thank you, I don't have time yet to increase the number of words in the chapters but I will try to fix that.
what's the age for finishing highschool? is it 17 or 18? because either way, 2 years of culinary school + minimum of 3 years in the army + who knows how long the webnovel arc and gambling addiction arc took, does not equals to final year of highschool. Also please fix chapter 2, I lost braincells trying to read it. I know it's all fiction, but everything still need logic to it.
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:why don't you reply to the comments about the change of names !?? if you want to write a Chinese cultivation themed novel for fk sake change the name ... or make it so that it's not just Chinese cultivation themed ... don't you ever read readers comments !? or do you not value their opinions on some matters !? cz while this is your book you can do whatever but you should also get opinions as well...