Review Detail of Dissociation in Moved to a new link

I'm more of a fantasy kinda guy, so I may seem to have a small bias here~ But still, this was wonderfully written! :oo The characters are beautifully done, and they feel like they truly belong within the world they're placed in. Their struggles aren't overly dramatic, and you can follow the logical and emotional lines of thought of the characters! The story is also quite hooking! Updates could be more stable though.