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kuchufli_tuyo
kuchufli_tuyoLv11yr
2023-02-19 07:29

The idea was fine at first but I realized that the mc is going to be weak and will have to be protected by his children, from what I understand, patriarchs or leaders in general are strong, intelligent or have some special ability. The system is one of the worst I've seen, I saw many comments that said it's realistic and when someone wanted the mc to be stronger and they asked me what's realistic about a baby being born in 2 weeks, I left it in chapter 22 I didn't want to keep wasting time (Google translator).

I am the patriarch of Naruto

Daoisttt
4.7
67 Chs

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xlvlx
xlvlxLv4

Interesting and has potential. I hope he gets kaguya in his harem and revive mikoto and kushina to join his harem too. Keep up the good work and pls update more!

2yr

mikedanger
mikedangerLv5

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

2yr
DAOIST_SUPREME
DAOIST_SUPREMELv4

I liked 😁

2yr
mastermanking
mastermankingLv4

I liked it but the recent chapter showed the main guy doesn't care about his wife's feelings if he can simple make her and his new wife kiss and get along after her son died I am giving it up but that's just my taste I still believe the writing is great and the story has alot of promise but the simple lack of respect for the wife's feelings turned me off of it hope everyone who reads this has a good day

2yr
jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5

I don't know how the story will progress, if he just waits for his sons to come out quickly and take care of everything (if there is no progress in the protagonist's strength, the story would be boring).

2yr
Daoisttt
DaoistttAuthor

Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!)

2yr
noliferslol
noliferslolLv4

I think that the concept of a system that will make it fundamentally impossible for the MC to become OP in traditional terms is interesting considering that theres so many wish fulfillment stories where the MC has a system and gets to be instantly OP through some convenient system assigned Saitama workout quest. Though I would prefer MC's patriarch charm to be nerfed since it makes any romance forced.

2yr
AdolfH
AdolfHLv1

Good..............................Good..............................Good "Reverend Insanity"......."Reverend insanity"........"reverend Insanity"..........."reverend insanity"

1yr
TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

Its a rap3 book pretty much. Guy cant even name his kids other than numbers as well. Its honestly just a fulfillment ff with mind rap3 and rap3 because that what it is. People trying saying its not but it is...was hoping more for a clan building that made sense and took some effort...

2yr
Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4

Thanks for the chapter! Still not sure about not naming his kids. Makes him sound like a tool!!! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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