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While the prose is clearly lacking and too simple, it still manages to gets the job done with it trying to captivate you in its characters, setting, and emotions. Pacing doesn't waste time introducing where it's heading and going for. A typical teen romance drama it is indeed. Characters are bit of an archetypes but can be built upon and have potential into becoming great characters. You also definitely feel for the MC. The story is nothing special and pretty much relying on genre formula and the typical established tropes with the execution being pretty similar in previous teen romance fiction. Will recommend to readers if you want another typical engaging teen romance fiction. PS: This review is only based on the first chapter.

Playful Romance

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Thank you for pointing out those lacking parts on my story. I'll make sure to remember it and used your advice well in the future chapters.