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Read till Chapter 4. Writing quality - 5/5 - Decent quality writing. Story Development - 4/5 - Really fast paced. would like an Auxiliary chapter detailing MC's background instead of it appearing as flashback. Would also prefer it if both world's pov is shown (as an interlude or something). Character Design - 3/5 - Hard to say with so few chapters but seems too focused on training and no dialogues with any other person of his age (Physical age). Updating Stability - 5/5 - Hard to say that this is good or not when only 4 chapters are released 😅. World background - 5/5 - Fairy Tail and Dxd are good mix, hope you can bring out the best of both worlds, Literally. Overall - 4.4/5.0 - Decent fic all things said. Not too great nor too bad (Will update review after further reading).
Fairy Tail: A Gremory's Tale
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Thanks for the insight. For the detailed background of mc, I'll try to write some auxiliary chap or another side fix detailing his life. As for pov of both worlds, it'll come later. And for the dialogue with other characters, no worries since I slowly plan on getting him interacting with them and developing his character too.
Heir_of_Gremory:Thanks for the insight. For the detailed background of mc, I'll try to write some auxiliary chap or another side fix detailing his life. As for pov of both worlds, it'll come later. And for the dialogue with other characters, no worries since I slowly plan on getting him interacting with them and developing his character too.
*Review update - As Chapter 4 was changed, I would rate Character Design as 4/5. P.S- Hope MC can acclimate to FT world a bit more. He seems to be hyper-focused on wanting to return as if, if he doesn't return in time it would be disastrous or something 😅. People in new world usually see if that world has anything beneficial to oneself. Example - If a magician is sent to FT, they would try out the new world's magic system and how it would help out his family or something like that.