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Chapter 16 is missing...

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Rather than changing 'Transfiguration' by bringing such limitation, couldn't you have introduced a related branch of magic - 'Transmutation'. Doing that would have given you much more creative liberty.

'One above, myriad beneath' would make more sense.

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This review is based on the 1st volume, i.e., till Chapter 64. Writing Quality - 5/5 - One of the best when it concerns writing quality. Story Development - 5/5 - This story is definitely among my all time top 5 list when it comes to Nasuverse. The story really has a great flow, it goes from general arthurian myth to connecting to FGO lore and from how the first volume ended, it seems even lostbelt shall be included. Have really great expectations for succeeding volumes. Character Design - 4/5 - I loved how you went about fleshing the MC along with his relationship with other characters. The only flaw I find is I found the ending of volume a bit rushed along with the fact that the inclusion of Ritsuka Fujimaru and Mash was not required as they were merely spectators. Updating Stability - 5/5 - I have no complaints with respect to updating stability. World Background - 5/5 - I believe that the author has made great use of Nasuverse lore in this novel. Overall - 4.8/5 - I have to say that although my review is subjective, I have really liked the first volume of this Novel. Kudos to you author! 🎉, may you continue to bring to us more of your wonderful, sacred text!

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