Had a lot of promise for a bit, but it had some mistakes (not sure if this is an AU or not tho), such as mentioning Japan when the OPM work is just one supercontinent with cities. Also, and quite frankly the weirdest thing about this fic, the MC starts making plans on how he can inject himself into the life of Tatsumaki to slowly gain her 'affections'. This is just....disgusting really. He's a grown man and he's planning these kinds of things. He even has some sort of self-reflection where he acknowledges how messed up it is, but then he justifies it by essentially saying, "whatever happens, happens". If that wasn't enough, I'm pretty sure he is also aiming for Tatsumaki's younger sister...personally, I can't really handle reading about such a degenerate of an MC, but if you can ignore that and the sort of spotty grammar then maybe you will like this.
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