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Review Detail of LordRigby in Gravity Falls: A Summer Full Of Mysteries... FINALLY!!!

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LordRigbyLv42yrLordRigby

The idea and concept behind the fanfiction is pretty solid. But at one point the author just loses track of the original character and just emulates Luffy with a higher degree of intelligence rather than the character displayed in the beginning.

Gravity Falls: A Summer Full Of Mysteries... FINALLY!!!

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I said that desire number 1 ended up influencing him, and I do that because I think it's more fun to do, he has a luffy way when it comes to meat right now, but I plan to grow the foot.character he would be like me so i'll just follow the flow of the story thanks for the review

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LordRigbyLv4LordRigby

Alright neat, I’m looking forward to seeing where this development takes the young MC. After all a gravity falls has a lot of potential, so good luck on your journey lad.

Arthur_Gameplay:I said that desire number 1 ended up influencing him, and I do that because I think it's more fun to do, he has a luffy way when it comes to meat right now, but I plan to grow the foot.character he would be like me so i'll just follow the flow of the story thanks for the review
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