LordRigby
I am the great and almighty Rigby. I’ve come to these foreign lands with the intent to entertain myself...
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LordRigby11mthrespondió a Mintu_Sharma_5538I think the author is building the MC’s powers and general abilities through more sunlight exposure? MC currently reminds me of superboy (the clone mf) from young justice in terms of his current abilities
"Well, I'm not exactly a genius like Tony Stark or Dr. Banner. My IQ is decent, around 120, but I don't have their advanced knowledge. So, I guess my main contribution here is my strength."- LordRigby1yrComentado por
Peak, and I am a bit biased because I do like House Celtigar a lot. But I do think the timelining could use some work - or at least make it more explicit of the MC’s age throughout the past few chapters, there was a timeskip that threw me off slightly.
Ch 5 Chapter 5: Town’s Ruler - 103 AC - LordRigby1yrComentado porCh 1 Chapter 19 : satisfaction
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Firey priest was peak fiction
As for the rest of my appearance, I have no facial hair, I wear absolutely no jewelry whatsoever, and I generally avoid wearing gangster clothing because I don't want to be mistaken for a gang member. In addition to that, I occasionally wear superhero-themed clothing, but whenever I go to someplace important like work, I always try to look and act professional. At the same time, I always try to avoid wearing black clothing because, in simple terms, my family's religious belief says that any human being wearing black from head to toe is considered a devil spawn and that the only kind of devil spawn that would wear black from head to toe would be the Antichrist. - LordRigby1yrComentado por
There is some potential with this route
- Ancient One (Yao)(this one was a surprise to me, but there was more than just one who suggested her. After thinking about it, I also think this would kinda make sense as Ichibe is quite 'wise' or at least as 'wise' as me, the author.) - LordRigby1yrComentado por
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Honestly, this is the first fandiction I’ve seen of Kingdom - it’s a great show and has a excellent concept behind it when it comes to the zombies and how they’re made. This fanfic is alright, the writing quality could be better and so can the structure - yet it’s readable and you can see the story progress. Besides some general improvements to world building and writing I think this idea can do well.
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Owari No Seraph for sure, or even House Of The Dragon
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It’s all cool man, this story is great but Uni is even greater. So make sure to take breaks to do things.
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You did a good job handling this response, Sir Tickler of my Holy Order of Ticklers, but I’m like 90% sure this dude didn’t read your novel which by the way is great but was instead searching for a harem lemonfest with no plot pertaining to Issei, or just a braindead harem fic
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This is getting better and better mate, my only qualm is the pacing is a bit fast. Maybe before you jump straight into the next avengers movie we could get more background development, perhaps some involvement in any of the MCU Shows? That’s just my take but honestly this is going great.
Ch 21 Age of Ultron 5 - LordRigby1yrComentado porCh 14 In Exchange of Power
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Swing back
"He's hating the fact there's not a Slytherin champion," Amanda whispered by my side. I sighed, and smiled at her. She punched me in the sides. "Stop eye-twinkling," she hissed. - LordRigby1yrComentado por
Putting Ichigo to shame here
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