With only one chapter posted, not much can be said. Descriptions are pretty good, and the opening chapter does a good job of somewhat explaining the plot and motivations. The possibility available for gallows humour is strong here. Only complaint is that there aren't enough chapters to make a true judgement yet at time of writing.
Cynical_Stranger
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me gustaI didn't. When I clicked on it it took me straight to chapter 1, so I didn't know it existed. I'll have a look soon.
Cynical_Stranger:While I am pretty busy, chapter 2 is on its way. Did you read the prologue as well?
Yes, it is because this site for some reason loads special chapters only after normal ones. I changed it to a normal chapter so now it will appear first.
Stormzz:I didn't. When I clicked on it it took me straight to chapter 1, so I didn't know it existed. I'll have a look soon.