Straight to the point ha?

Exactly what I was thinking.

Appropriate response, would probably feel the same if I woke up in my fathers body lol

Rainwater makes sense, fruits won't give you enough water to survive for days. Adding a small line about that should be enough 👍

What about water?

You would think he would be more paranoid to drink anything after his father was just poisoned.

A poison for the soul, interesting.

I was bored at the start but this novel grow on me. I laughed out loud a couple of times and the character of the demon god is likable and fun so far. I find it kind of weird that his parents named him Lucifer like they knew he was a demon god. On top of that, how is he moving around and using magic when he is only months old? Even if he is a god, physically he is still just a baby. Overall I enjoyed this novel and may be back for more.

lol

Remember to add a "." at the end of your sentences.

Not bad so far, the demon god's last words were hilarious.

I wonder if the historians will fabricate more glories last words for the demon king.

lol, I imagine him waving his hand and then ragdolling with a death scream.

Not a bad start. You have grammar mistakes here and there and some of your sentences are a bit too long. I do like the way you describe things so far, paints a clear enough picture. I would appreciate more descriptions of the surrounding. Overall, a good start.

*vampire's doing

*listen to the hunters

while I didn't read all the chapters yet, it is not bad so far. I really like your writing style, it is very deceptive. It paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind.

Not bad so far.

Interesting start

lol