Review Detail of Phoenix_Paradise in Harry Potter and the White Death Eater

The story is good, and contains interesting character background. The MC is a Rosier (the youngest of his siblings), has a power similar to the Eage Vision from Assassin's Creed and is born within Harry Potter's generation. He also has a [System] that tells him about his spell completion rate, among other things that I have forgotten. It doesn't take much presidence within the story and is more assisting to the MC's knowledge development. Although there are some translation issues, the quality of it is good enough to read and not get angered. Although there may occasionally be some confusion - an example of this would be the translation for Death Eater. The main character is also referred to as the direst heir of Rosier, when he isn't, despite being the youngest of 4-6 siblings. Between chapters 39 - 41(?) there is some translation mistakes with calling the MC female and giving his Guardian, during his transfer at the Brazilian magic school, Eagle vision. These need to be looked at. The updates are frequent enough to not get annoyed with, and the character and story has good development. I gave this a 3* in world background due to the inclusion of the Brazilian magic School (could never spell it correctly), otherwise I would have given it a 2* as the novel is fanfic in nature and doesn't require much in-depth discussion or development unless it includes topics that aren't talked or known about in canon or are original concepts/ideas to do with the world. It's still to early to give the story higher makes at it has just gone past the MC's first year at Hogwarts. Overall, it's a good story with an interesting main character and good character interaction and character development. It is also of a high enough quality to not be mistaken for an ntl, mostly. I look forward to see where the story develops.