Phoenix_Paradise
I think I've read more light novels than I have braincells. * Mr_Whimsy (old name)
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Phoenix_Paradise6dComentado porI've never really been fons of stories that enter the perspective of another character besides the protagonist, except when it's about the protagonist. Its their story after all. Thanks for the chapter.
AN: So, the second task is finally on the horizon... As usual please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.- Phoenix_Paradise12dComentado por
it's been 4 years and I remember nothing, time to re-read. Thanks for the chapter.
The Hardest Fight - Phoenix_Paradise18dComentado por
Nice. Thnx for the chapter.
Even Lockhart couldn't avoid feeling the bloodlust emanating from Greyback's eyes, but Hermione noticed something else on the opposite side of the classroom: the members of the duel club, especially William, who had taken his wand to fight against the threat. - Phoenix_Paradise20dComentado por
Not the kiss? Huh? Thanks for the chapter.
After hours of deliberation, Barty Crouch Sr. stood up. "After considering all the evidence and testimonies, the Wizengamot declares Fenrir Greyback guilty on all charges. He will be sentenced to life in Azkaban, without the possibility of parole." - Phoenix_Paradise22dComentado por
"I'm also the little mortifage" "I'm also a little scared/frightened" (both words work. Thanks for the chapter.
"I have to enjoy it while I can, when the truth is revealed I won't be able to scare everyone anymore..." William was silent for a moment "Yeah, there's no way I won't keep annoying them, I'm also the little mortifage." - Phoenix_Paradise30dComentado por
Lovecraftian Elder God's and other Eldritch type beings would be my guess. Thanks for the chapter.
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He turning into Ji Ning (Desolate Era)? Thanks for the chapter.
Rayleigh did not actually want his sword to burst into flames or send blades of water. He was a swordsman, not the Avatar. He would use the flow of these elements only to strengthen his body and swordsmanship. This would form his foundation. From this, he would fuse every other aspect of the world into his swordsmanship. - Phoenix_Paradise1mthComentado por
What is a summary for each Haki? Thanks for the chapter.
The bad news? If you don't like the idea of Haki ending up like a cultivation LN, I can only apologize. It's not my fault that this is the only explanation that fits all usages! - Phoenix_Paradise1mthrespondió a Sanyam_Malhotra
but a large majority are vertical lines with, perhaps, at most, some bumps and/or curvature.
The wand-shaped cut could be seen as Voldemort marking Charles as his equal for the final confrontation in the future. - Phoenix_Paradise1mthrespondió a GnomeBob
Vergo wasn't harmed after being bisected by Law, he died when the building he was in got blown up. Law used Room before slicing him. Whilst Devil Fruit powers can be resisted by Haki there have been cases of it being overwhelmed by sheer force, as shown in the Luffy V Hancock's sisters fight. There is also the belief that Law supplemented his attack by coating his sword with armament Haki, giving his slicing capabilities a power boost.
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Was Law's DF the reason behind that? Thanks for the chapter .
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I thought Hufflepuff won it last year? Thanks for the chapter.
Arabella changed the subject, "Let's drop Quidditch for a bit. What about the House Cup? You Ravenclaws really stole it last minute last year." - Phoenix_Paradise1mthComentado por
Mass relocation of creatures who have inhabited an area for a prolonged period of time seems like a bad idea. It would affect the food chain and, potentially, the growth of fauna. Thanks for the chapter.
Moreover, Harry had a long-term goal to ensure the safety of the forest surrounding Hogwarts. He planned to either eliminate or relocate all dangerous creatures within the forest by the time he graduated. It was irresponsible to allow such threats to linger near a school filled with curious and sometimes reckless students. In achieving this, Harry recognized that he might need the cooperation of the centaurs, who knew the forest better than anyone else. Establishing a mutual understanding now could be crucial for his future endeavors in maintaining the safety of the Hogwarts grounds. - Phoenix_Paradise1mthComentado por
There is a story where the protagonist can use their system to simulate their future path. The rank, seed, and breathing style, remind me of it. Thanks for the chapter.
The decline of knights was also hastened by the personalized nature of the Knight breathing exercises, many of which were tailored to specific family bloodlines. For example, the breathing method that Godric Gryffindor left behind was meant just for his family line, which meant not just anyone could learn it. - Phoenix_Paradise1mthComentado por
If Charley was 4-5 years younger than this Harry, being the canonical age of the original Harry Potter, and Cedric Diggory is in the same year as the Weasley Twins who are two years older than the original Harry... how would Cedric be in the same year as him? Thanks for the chapter.
A particularly notable encounter for Harry was with Cedric Diggory and his parents. Given that Cedric was destined to be in the same Hogwarts year as Harry, they spent a good deal of time chatting during the party. Cedric lived up to his literary description—a quintessential Hufflepuff with an approachable aura and a touch of shyness that Harry found endearing. Harry was quick to befriend him, though he humorously noted Cedric's father, Amos's, tendency to boast about his son's achievements. A gentle reminder from Sirius about Harry's own academic success was enough to temper Amos's enthusiasm. - Phoenix_Paradise1mthComentado por
I mean this in the kindest way, if you're going to weaken the metamorphmagus just don't bother. A reasonably skilled witch/wizard using Transfiguration could accomplish the same thing. Thanks for the chapter.
As Harry experimented with his newfound abilities, he discovered a partial Metamorphmagus talent, inherited from his Black great-grandmother. The ability to alter his appearance, though limited to just the face, was a remarkable gift. - Phoenix_Paradise1mthComentado por
Isn't a "wand-shaped cut" just a vertical line? Thanks for the chapter.
The wand-shaped cut could be seen as Voldemort marking Charles as his equal for the final confrontation in the future. - Phoenix_Paradise1mthComentado por
Good to see an update on this story. And to give my opinion, it depends on how it looks . Thanks for the chapter.
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"despite intent being a major factor", did you miss this part of the comment? Whilst not as in-detail as your comment, it should at least have conveyed that I understood how important intent is for spell casting. Saying that, why did you respond with a comment explaining the intents needed for the Unforgivables?
This was because apparition worked based on the concept of spatial tunneling that involved creating a small tube of magic that flung the wizard from one spot to another based on the coordinates they set. Normally this process would take a period of time to make calculations but thanks to the nature of magic that wasn't necessary so long as the rules of apparition were followed. See magic as a whole had this funny property of remembering spells so that the next time they are used even if it is by a complete idiot they only need the words and wand movements to succeed if there is no intent in the spell.- - Phoenix_Paradise2mthrespondió a
Did you give that response, using example, to assist readers in better understanding the Unforgivables, or for a different reason?
This was because apparition worked based on the concept of spatial tunneling that involved creating a small tube of magic that flung the wizard from one spot to another based on the coordinates they set. Normally this process would take a period of time to make calculations but thanks to the nature of magic that wasn't necessary so long as the rules of apparition were followed. See magic as a whole had this funny property of remembering spells so that the next time they are used even if it is by a complete idiot they only need the words and wand movements to succeed if there is no intent in the spell.-