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2024-07-10 17:53

story idea is interesting but character seems to jump around. there is very little character growth other then 'LETS GRAB IT ALL AND TAKE THE WOMAN TOO.'

Through the Multiverse

resistingsea
4.3
62 Chs

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sonia_arebalo
sonia_arebaloLv2

interesing history. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

3yr

marianela_arebalo_7450
marianela_arebalo_7450Lv3

Just one tip: you could make a chapter at the beginning, where you would put the worlds you visit, the girls, what you will do, so that what comes next is not lost, several readers always get lost when names appear or forget it, it would be better for him reader and for you put the names of important people and their girls.

3yr
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

One of the worst fanfics I’ve read. The grammar is terrible, the MC is annoying, and the author’s humor is terrible. I hope he doesn’t make these jokes in real life so that people don’t need to force themselves to give some pity-laughs.

1yr
dimas115
dimas115Lv5

the authors use trash talking too much, although sometime it will be funny but if you use too much it will become digusting. the background setting none, author didnt tell us about the world he is in,i know it is fanfiction but sometime people who hasnt read or watching it o it is better to tell us in broef about the world. character development 0,

3yr
Saintbarbido
SaintbarbidoLv4

The grammar could use a little work. That said, the book stands out as compared to others of the same Trope in this site. The mc is interesting in the earlier chapters and I'm curious to see his character development.

3yr
jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5

more chapter autor please. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

3yr
Daoistx465Sm
Daoistx465SmLv2

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3yr
MelisitaPtlv
MelisitaPtlvLv4

Your story seems interesting, if you want it to be more striking, I would recommend that you put a more striking image and some labels, with a more detailed synopsis.

3yr
shiro_43
shiro_43Lv11

get a couple chapters in and you'll see how ridiculous this story is its dumb Because if i had to go through the pain of reading it so will you. I had a little hope this would be good i was wrong very wrong. some people might like it but its not for me.some people might like it but its not for me.Some people might might like it but its just not for me.

3yr
GawkGawk
GawkGawkLv3

The author isnt really good at writing stories as a whole. But more of rushing the details and just explaining what he does and not how or why he does it.

3yr
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