Item: Through the Multiverse
Rating: 5

marianela_arebalo_7450Lv33yr

2021-02-03 22:19

Just one tip: you could make a chapter at the beginning, where you would put the worlds you visit, the girls, what you will do, so that what comes next is not lost, several readers always get lost when names appear or forget it, it would be better for him reader and for you put the names of important people and their girls.

Through the Multiverse

resistingsea

4.3

62 Chs

Liked by 8 people

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resistingseaAuthor

Like before each volume if not, do you mean a auxiliary chaper in the beginning?

3yr

gkfkLv4

will he ever go into any animes universe

resistingsea:Like before each volume if not, do you mean a auxiliary chaper in the beginning?

3yr

PsychopathKillerLv1

Yes

resistingsea:Like before each volume if not, do you mean a auxiliary chaper in the beginning?

3yr

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