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Your description of the characters look are good but when it comes to their personality, it is better to show and not tell. You have a bunch of grammar mistakes but your writing is not bad overall. The concept of the story and world seem quiet generic and dull to me. All and all, this kind of story is not my cup of tea, so others may appreciate it way more than me.
Heroes of Valor
Arc_Valkyria
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Thank you for the review and honest thoughts.. The current chapters are only fillers and I know there are some grammatical errors but this is my first novel. I'm still learning and improving my writing style. About the show and tell.. I do know that too yet I'm doing my best to adapt to it and later chapters will be slowly showing that style of writing.. The main story is still not shown because it was on the "filler stage" For now, it was quite generic tho.. I really appreciate your review💕