Review Detail of AllenCross in BEING AN EMPEROR IN STAR WARS

What I didn't like: 1) Very MC, there is no sane achievement of power. 2) The world is faded, everything revolves around MC, four girls are so for the background (not disclosed), his kingdom likewise does not take part in his life, no events happen that it is that it is not. 3) The work is written as if torn, as if the author is jumping like a kangaroo from thought to thought. 4) The motivation of the hero is not clear, what he wants and what to achieve, what goals he pursues, just as the hero himself is not formed, we do not know anything about him in fact. 5) The battles of both the protagonist and space, ground-based are very unworked, do not keep you in tension and there is no desire to know how the confrontation will unfold. Nagging: 1) A very strong obsession with technology and clones of the forces of the republic, there is no creativity. 2) It is annoying every time when another clone is mentioned, you write in what phase it is dressed. 3) Where did Plokun go when, was going to find out from where there was a surge of strength... What I liked: 1) The choice of the universe for the work.