Scout, Aubrey, and Zule are good girls for the main character. No more girls are needed, as these three will have a super strong bond with the main character after the jabim.

Ugh... mediocre chapter. It gave off a mostly nasty feeling.

Yeah, it's just like everyone else again.....

Even though the chapters are short, I'll leave a review and it's negative. In general, the quality of writing is low, complete lack of text construction, no editing of chapters, all the author had enough to do was divide into paragraphs. Character design is superficial, dry, not informative. The interactions are also superficial. On the plus side, this is the concept of Orochemaru's former student/partner.

And it shouldn't make any sense to you) It's a fanfic, I mean it's an alternate history, there could be a lot of other things going on here.

Started like all fanfics well, and then the fire begins to fade, relationships, narration, the text itself becomes ordinary (boring), which eventually turns from pleasure to routine. But the most important problem of all this story is the main character, he is just a robot, with each chapter he ceases to cause feelings for him (the main character). There is absolutely no development of the character emotionally... It's just bad, for me personally. And yes, it's an impotent story.

Uninteresting and boring, a boon to the author not responding to the readers' wishes at all.

Half of the text in the two chapters, are blank and act as mere filler for the text.... That is, they don't carry anything at all.

Cool, waiting for Indiana Jones and Wuchang: Fallen Feathers.

Likewise, but unfortunately I don't think the series will be revived ((

Well, what can I say, about the translation and the speed of updating no complaints, but here to the plot of them with each chapter is becoming more and more, and along with this and disgust to this story, I certainly understand that the plot is tied to the revival of former comrades, but as soon as the first resurrected, so the plot went one place in the furnace. It's like I'm not reading a story set in the world of Naruto, but just an alternate history of Demon Slayers. And the plot, instead of being intriguing, does the exact opposite and starts to get annoying. It's a story for fans of the Demon Slayers anime.

Honestly don't like the fact that it's all about resurrecting former mates.... I don't think it's a good idea to continue reading.

Absolutely did not like it, I expected some radical changes, but in the end it turned out to be grey and standard canon.

Oooh, it's good that it's being said now, but it could have been said sooner. Now, of course, there is some uncertainty about whether to continue reading this story or to throw it away and forget it.

We get that already, why do we have to repeat it every time that vocabulary is scarce?

Personally I missed all the battles, you failed to show the drive in the fight, basically in these chapters (battles) every third paragraph is a praise of himself, which is just getting annoying we already realised that Tai Lung is strong, that he has studied many scrolls, but why repeat it every third paragraph. In short the descriptions of the battle are below average fanfic.

No well I disagree here, in fact the author just gives everything to Sasuke through Naruto, which is honestly annoying.

Honestly I regret the time spent, the changes so far are minimal. And it's boring.