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amaturewriter
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This is retarded..this is a true neglect FF...just like the rest of the garbage.....ie: MC is neglected, tortured and raped [chp 1 and chp 2]......and yet author does this retarded **** of making MC normal and happy despite what he is been through,, I mean everything is unrealistic....I mean the kages child being tortured.... to said childs mentality....point is, its just like all the other neglect FF's out there, authors **** up MC just for a sad story and theres no change for MC's mentality, plus all their **** is unrealistic [i mean, even in cannon naruto didnt gone through this ****, .......if author wanted to do it, he should've built it, instead of this ****]...no bash...just...if yah despise neglect FF,,,dont read this

Naruto: The Neglected Dragon

Gejahex

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Gejahex
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He is not happy at all.

amaturewriter
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i am sorry bru...just the retarded **** without build up is annoying.....like I get unrealistic **** and sad sob story, gives author more power to allow MC to do dark ****, etc but it gotta make sense...you just cant do the stuff you did...seriously? crucifying and raping a kid.....look, even in history, the only ones who did **** like that were psycho murders and scientists [nazis]....not normal people

Gejahex:He is not happy at all.
RedMonkeyDog
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Romans Crucified and raped a bunch the christian church crucified young women on a stake to be burned for witch craft in the name of god but neither of those two were considered psychotic one was one of the most advanced in military at the time and the other one of the biggest religious belief so it wasn't just psychotic ppl that did these things hell some of the thing the church did in the name of god would make the Nazi look like childs play

amaturewriter:i am sorry bru...just the retarded **** without build up is annoying.....like I get unrealistic **** and sad sob story, gives author more power to allow MC to do dark ****, etc but it gotta make sense...you just cant do the stuff you did...seriously? crucifying and raping a kid.....look, even in history, the only ones who did **** like that were psycho murders and scientists [nazis]....not normal people
amaturewriter
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Dude..I know about the church, they raped and crucified and burned but the reason why I put nazi was because of what they did...they made a nation believe other races were worthless, like animals were worth more than them..they entirely separated and marked jews...experimented on them...hell many nazi scientists used babies and created artificial siamease twins...the Nazis made normal people believe it was okay to exterminate anyone other than the aryan race, something no other group, etc ever did, slaves lived better, thats saying something.....slaves were used no matter what, but the nazis CHOSE to use as slaves or kill em......compared to what cristians/cruch did, this was worse, this was probably one of the best mind influences in human history...believe me, when I say that the nazi were bad.......its their message, and even their cruelty that makes em so horrible if ya want...its there in modern history, Auschwitz, etc

RedMonkeyDog:Romans Crucified and raped a bunch the christian church crucified young women on a stake to be burned for witch craft in the name of god but neither of those two were considered psychotic one was one of the most advanced in military at the time and the other one of the biggest religious belief so it wasn't just psychotic ppl that did these things hell some of the thing the church did in the name of god would make the Nazi look like childs play
Gejahex
GejahexAutorGejahex

Damn, never thought I would have an arguement on Nazi's on my Naruto Fanfic. Still not the weirdest thing I have seen.

amaturewriter:Dude..I know about the church, they raped and crucified and burned but the reason why I put nazi was because of what they did...they made a nation believe other races were worthless, like animals were worth more than them..they entirely separated and marked jews...experimented on them...hell many nazi scientists used babies and created artificial siamease twins...the Nazis made normal people believe it was okay to exterminate anyone other than the aryan race, something no other group, etc ever did, slaves lived better, thats saying something.....slaves were used no matter what, but the nazis CHOSE to use as slaves or kill em......compared to what cristians/cruch did, this was worse, this was probably one of the best mind influences in human history...believe me, when I say that the nazi were bad.......its their message, and even their cruelty that makes em so horrible if ya want...its there in modern history, Auschwitz, etc
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

nah..man just saying how ****ed our world is...and how successful people were...tragic actually...makes you wonder what good they could've done instead

Gejahex:Damn, never thought I would have an arguement on Nazi's on my Naruto Fanfic. Still not the weirdest thing I have seen.
Gejahex
GejahexAutorGejahex

They had potential for good but wasted it on prejudice and nonsense killing.

amaturewriter:nah..man just saying how ****ed our world is...and how successful people were...tragic actually...makes you wonder what good they could've done instead
Native
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Dude religion is worse fact they brainwashed entire civilizations into wiping out others just for difference in belief. The holy crusades is just one instance out of many. religion may have good in it but the fact is it has been used to control the masses in many different ways in the past the pope many times had more power than the kings.

amaturewriter:Dude..I know about the church, they raped and crucified and burned but the reason why I put nazi was because of what they did...they made a nation believe other races were worthless, like animals were worth more than them..they entirely separated and marked jews...experimented on them...hell many nazi scientists used babies and created artificial siamease twins...the Nazis made normal people believe it was okay to exterminate anyone other than the aryan race, something no other group, etc ever did, slaves lived better, thats saying something.....slaves were used no matter what, but the nazis CHOSE to use as slaves or kill em......compared to what cristians/cruch did, this was worse, this was probably one of the best mind influences in human history...believe me, when I say that the nazi were bad.......its their message, and even their cruelty that makes em so horrible if ya want...its there in modern history, Auschwitz, etc
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

stop arguing about this.....the church massacred yes,,,but the nazis experimented and ****, plus nazis number are larger its recorded, its fact...look stop talking about this, I feel weird explaining about **** like this

Native:Dude religion is worse fact they brainwashed entire civilizations into wiping out others just for difference in belief. The holy crusades is just one instance out of many. religion may have good in it but the fact is it has been used to control the masses in many different ways in the past the pope many times had more power than the kings.
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

also why you saying this? didnt ya read the previous comment

Native:Dude religion is worse fact they brainwashed entire civilizations into wiping out others just for difference in belief. The holy crusades is just one instance out of many. religion may have good in it but the fact is it has been used to control the masses in many different ways in the past the pope many times had more power than the kings.
Imabethatguy12345
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He's an idiot, he blames religion for everything. Atheists are hypocrites. Some of the stuff they accuse of religion do the exact same thing. There is evil in every culture, but what people don't realize is there is also beauty and goodness. Its not just church who did those horrible stuff. You were reviewing about His story and he came in and talked about how Christianity and church is shot, I know some good people who are christians. This entire arguement, About religion was irrelevant, and unnessasary, and why am I posting this? I dunno just wanted to...I dunno.

amaturewriter:also why you saying this? didnt ya read the previous comment
Imabethatguy12345
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*Shit

Imabethatguy12345:He's an idiot, he blames religion for everything. Atheists are hypocrites. Some of the stuff they accuse of religion do the exact same thing. There is evil in every culture, but what people don't realize is there is also beauty and goodness. Its not just church who did those horrible stuff. You were reviewing about His story and he came in and talked about how Christianity and church is shot, I know some good people who are christians. This entire arguement, About religion was irrelevant, and unnessasary, and why am I posting this? I dunno just wanted to...I dunno.
Imabethatguy12345
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*Shit

Imabethatguy12345:He's an idiot, he blames religion for everything. Atheists are hypocrites. Some of the stuff they accuse of religion do the exact same thing. There is evil in every culture, but what people don't realize is there is also beauty and goodness. Its not just church who did those horrible stuff. You were reviewing about His story and he came in and talked about how Christianity and church is shot, I know some good people who are christians. This entire arguement, About religion was irrelevant, and unnessasary, and why am I posting this? I dunno just wanted to...I dunno.