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Alahoo ?
so is the mc just going to keep copying kakashi right down to how he trained his team ?
i like the concept of the novel but i dont like all the outside or otherworld stuff just popping up in the harry potter world i mean it would be dif if it was already there like a crossover and the gods are probably the most annoying part but i'll keep reading
typo here (goblins)
those eyebrows are just as bad as lee's
his father is muggle
why on the glasses ?
ah k
tree binding illusion ?
the novel is ok the translation is ok not the best but not the worst never mind the Author pull random stuff out his ass for bible verses for expelling the ghosts and demons it could be better with a little research . as for the translation i would say to proof read before posting in the future to make sure everything reads right and it flows
why use lord god when clearly it should be lady goddess ? or just lady hestia
Kuroka