This story is great. It regularly updates and has many chapters with sound writing and story development. The characters are interesting and the world background is good and expansive. The only issue I have is with its beginning. The story starts off with just too many tragedies. Not only was his families betrayal sad, but so was Camilla's choice. I think she has become part of Vallkary (half soul) but nonetheless, it was heartless and a reason to quit reading. Although over time her reason is explained, but the bitter taste of start remained. I only continued to read after because of the Author's other work in hopes of it getting better and it did. There was also MC's character that seemed very erratic when he acted like a hero for no reason and he failed to cover his tracks even though he read a lot of books as a prince and also from the protector of Exiled land. 1 - Camilla's decision, 2 - his heroic act and trying to fight blight does not suit him and his personality, 3- his mistakes in covering his tracks are the shortcomings of the book. (Without any proper explanation from Camilla herself her action shouts, I don't care about you. I do not expect to change the end of the first arc, but the lack of proper reason for her action is the problem. especially since she also wanted to stay longer a few chapters before.) Overall, the story has great it has everything you can expect from it. The MC is likeable most of the time. The story flows greatly and the side characters are developed and very likeable. Especially the latest arc about Slaughter God is very interesting. I also find the addition of Harem, with proper character development a positive of the story. I am not sure if the Heroic path is where he should end up, but nonetheless, it was a great read so far and looking forward to more.
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