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Uncle_Sheogorath
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Good story so far but don't soften the mc. After all, he was a former assassin so he shouldn't react extremely to disturbing things for example how he reacted to Itachi going to war. I hate it when mc somehow have tragic backgrounds but react not realistically. Also if you have him attached towards his family/clan. Please don't make him worship Itachi like some god. Even though Itachi is a badass, he is still a traitor to his family and clan I mean what normal person would betray their family to the government?

A Naruto Fan-Fic

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Lysonic
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a brainwashed one. "will of fire"