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Review Detail of Cindersen in 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

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Cindersen
CindersenLv45yrCindersen

Whoa. How did this get so many votes when the story is inspired by One Punch Man and this isn't a fan fiction inspired contest? Not to mention, it has poor writing with frequent lack of proper capitalization, punctuation, and overall correct sentence structure. The mistakes are so blatantly obvious that it makes me wonder if the reviewers who gave this such high ratings are in elementary school or something. My advice would be to use Grammarly or learn how to write better basic English because this grammar is pretty bad and detracts from any semblance of a story. I would have given you a one, but you tried, so two for effort. I hope you take my advice seriously in order to improve your story and writing.

'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

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Zeno_Sama_Hindi
Zeno_Sama_HindiLv2Zeno_Sama_Hindi

Yes there are grammer mistakes but it's Improving and there is a good story I guess it will become more interesting after some chaps right so I'm just supporting author

Zeno_Sama_Hindi
Zeno_Sama_HindiLv2Zeno_Sama_Hindi

Yes there are grammer mistakes but it's Improving and there is a good story I guess it will become more interesting after some chaps right so I'm just supporting author

Bittu_Dada
Bittu_DadaLv2Bittu_Dada

I know there are grammer mistakes but thats what unique in this novel and his style of writing kinda ....... ....... we like it very much so only suggested him to keep it up the uniqueness and story is also awesome you dont love it leave it we support it

Bittu_Dada
Bittu_DadaLv2Bittu_Dada

I know there are grammer mistakes but thats what unique in this novel and his style of writing kinda ....... ....... we like it very much so only suggested him to keep it up the uniqueness and story is also awesome you dont love it leave it we support it

Kalindi_Dalvi
Kalindi_DalviLv2Kalindi_Dalvi

Its unique bro you wont understand we people are right from start and we know that this author's writting style is like that not like everyone else that he shouldnt copy writting style of anyone its awesome and if you dont understand the story you may leave it.......

Kavita_Tawde
Kavita_TawdeLv2Kavita_Tawde

What is your problem dude we love the authors writing style and Grammer mistakes may happen because of Google translation we support it and it won't change because of Some criticizing people like you you don't like it then leave it it's story is best we are not mad for giving power stone right 😤😤😠😡😾

Kavita_Tawde
Kavita_TawdeLv2Kavita_Tawde

What is your problem dude we love the authors writing style and Grammer mistakes may happen because of Google translation we support it and it won't change because of Some criticizing people like you you don't like it then leave it it's story is best we are not mad for giving power stone right 😤😤😠😡😾

vaman_dalvi
vaman_dalviLv2vaman_dalvi

There is a problem with you dude it is best novel with a very good story arc...... love it or leave it

vaman_dalvi
vaman_dalviLv2vaman_dalvi

There is a problem with you dude it is best novel with a very good story arc...... love it or leave it

Waman_Dalvi
Waman_DalviLv2Waman_Dalvi

You are very illetrate person

Waman_Dalvi
Waman_DalviLv2Waman_Dalvi

Very bad and criticizing person doesn't even respect writing quality of author

Waman_Dalvi
Waman_DalviLv2Waman_Dalvi

Very bad and criticizing person doesn't even respect writing quality of author

Kshitij_Tawde
Kshitij_TawdeLv2Kshitij_Tawde

No need of your underated review

Kshitij_Tawde
Kshitij_TawdeLv2Kshitij_Tawde

No need of your underated review

Cindersen
CindersenLv4Cindersen

I don't care what you say about me. You have the right to criticize as much as I do in sharing my honest opinion. However, from all these spam responses that all babble in the same way, it sounds like you're all the same person.

MarcoDao
MarcoDaoLv14MarcoDao

Don't bother i think he's using bots (or multiple accounts) to spam powerstones and comments

Cindersen:I don't care what you say about me. You have the right to criticize as much as I do in sharing my honest opinion. However, from all these spam responses that all babble in the same way, it sounds like you're all the same person.
Robrave
RobraveLv13Robrave

LOL, all these people replying seems like the same person.

Kavita_Tawde
Kavita_TawdeLv2Kavita_Tawde

Bots how am I a bot lol hahahaha but I guess I support him because his unique style of writing and story is good I don't think so someone can gather like 10 to 15 multiple accounts it's kinda of next to impposible

MarcoDao:Don't bother i think he's using bots (or multiple accounts) to spam powerstones and comments
Kavita_Tawde
Kavita_TawdeLv2Kavita_Tawde

Bots how am I a bot lol hahahaha but I guess I support him because his unique style of writing and story is good I don't think so someone can gather like 10 to 15 multiple accounts it's kinda of next to impposible

MarcoDao:Don't bother i think he's using bots (or multiple accounts) to spam powerstones and comments
Kavita_Tawde
Kavita_TawdeLv2Kavita_Tawde

At least I am not a same person but I do support him lol. I think this much accounts can't be handled by an only user I think we novel should have banned him if he has more than 5 accounts on his phone...

Robrave:LOL, all these people replying seems like the same person.