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I've read this review before starting the novel, and with some expectation that probably the early chaps are not good, I just read on. And now in chapter 50, I realized it wasn't really that bad as per this review. It was nicely written actually. This review was probably written when he was having a bad day.
Ya, I think it is better if the Author at least give Alex a more matured mind. After all, he still experienced everything Shang had experienced.
This is wrong. Emotions are telling you that what you're thinking doesnt serve you. Change thoughts then emotion will follow. Dont ignore.
dude, how about destroying your spine at the base of the neck after jumping? pain is just signal to the brain and signal cant reach the brain with a broken spine. Then it wont be that painful.
it is more like its quill harvested it from the trees as it move around
True, that's why don't read it. My plan is that when I ever write a novel, I will complete it first before posting it so that reader's comments will not affect it. How I wish, lol
I've also read countless novels, have you seen "Full Marks Hidden Marriage"? I think it has one of the best ending ever.
Author forgot already the rule you've mentioned? Heh, maybe even the looking back thing will be forgotten too.
Yea, the target should give consent to it, William is not the kid.
lol smart, he should do that for most of his past lifes too
really? i guess some kind of time reversal will happen? that seems to be a dumb way to die
Undying, huh? But still died
I think this end result can still happen but at least don't make the MC stupid. A better plot would have been that the MC did his best using all his wits and brilliance but still eventually failed because the enemy is just stronger.
just like its loli God? lol