I actually forget why I have this book in my library since I don’t remember whether I initiated a review swap with you or not. If I did, forgive this goldfish for being forgetful. XD If I didn’t, oh well I had some reason lol! And I was on chapter 3 too. Now on chapter ten, I thought I’d write a quick review. Writing and Updates: 5 The writing in particular flows really weak. Oddly enough, it somehow very slightly detracts from the action scenes, making them almost too fluid. This is not bad tho; I think maybe just a little more thrill needs to be added to them. Story, Character, World: 4 All are well on their way to 5, but I just don’t quite see it there yet. The story lacks something really substantial on which to move forward. At this point, it’s just Arthur protecting Jade Rose technically. I’d like to see a bigger corruption, battle, or plot start to unfold in these first 10 chapters. I’m sure there eventually will be, but it’s good to input the clear allusions in the beginning. Character-wise, they’re all ok and fleshed out somewhat. But they lack something distinctive to separate them from any ML and FL in any story. I imagine their characters will be rounded out more in the future. I do see that they like each other but don’t know that the other likes them. Seen that type of plot before, but that’s still interesting for readers to follow. Overall, fluidly well-written, good story! Keep polishing and writing~!
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me gusta*fudge, bad typo. Writing flows really well not weak
Hey! Actually yeah, I swapped a review with you, hehe. Thanks for this!
Oh ok! XD Yw~
Asphant:Hey! Actually yeah, I swapped a review with you, hehe. Thanks for this!
